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Sequentials Update

Well I know it's been a while since my last update, but here's why. I've been working on my sequentials alot lately. My focus has been to really improve my storytelling, and streamline my line work. Hopefully I'm working towards achieving both.

Pat David .com - The Shop Comic Sequentials


Pat David .com - The Shop Comic Sequentials


Pat David .com - The Shop Comic Sequentials


Pat David .com - The Shop Comic Sequentials


Pat David .com - The Shop Comic Sequentials


Pat David .com - The Shop Comic Sequentials

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looks good. What method are you using for colors?
My only critique is the perspective on the buildings is offputting. I feel like you intended for it to be skewed, but I"m not sure it is successful. The story telling is nice, fluid.

Tommy, thanks for crit!

This was my first time using a perspective grid. I was happy with the results in a few of the panels, but completely agree with you that it wasn't successful.

The Colors were done in photoshop! Thanks again for dropping by Tommy, I really appreciate the honest feedback.

Love the skyline nice touch!

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