Sequentials Update
Well I know it's been a while since my last update, but here's why. I've been working on my sequentials alot lately. My focus has been to really improve my storytelling, and streamline my line work. Hopefully I'm working towards achieving both.






pat

Comments
looks good. What method are you using for colors?
My only critique is the perspective on the buildings is offputting. I feel like you intended for it to be skewed, but I"m not sure it is successful. The story telling is nice, fluid.
Posted by: Tommy Hood | February 26, 2008 01:21 PM
Tommy, thanks for crit!
This was my first time using a perspective grid. I was happy with the results in a few of the panels, but completely agree with you that it wasn't successful.
The Colors were done in photoshop! Thanks again for dropping by Tommy, I really appreciate the honest feedback.
Posted by: pat | March 1, 2008 09:03 PM
Love the skyline nice touch!
Posted by: 1jdevries | November 16, 2008 04:10 PM